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Uff, extremely well written, excellent descriptions, and flowing dialogue.

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Great stuff. You're really coming into your own on the prose front. Great flow to this story, good balance of show vs. tell, creative ways of showcasing this world's take on classic fantasy tropes. This has echoes of Mark Smylie's The Barrow (the very well-received prose series prequel to his Archaia comic/world). And more and more the whole of Ennead/Amashik is feeling like Smylie's brand - not a copy of, just fitting into a similar broad niche that honestly not many have successfully managed (comics, prose, worldbooks/RPGs, etc, but all of them top quality and written by the author.) Keep it coming.

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