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I love the narrative style here. Switching between the macro-political stuff and a smaller, more personal episodic adventure with Inahtuu. I also really appreciate the reference to The Most Dangerous Game, great concept for showing Inahtuu's competence early on. I don't always have a good sense of who the characters are (the man and woman sparring, great dialogue, but wasn't sure how to place them or if I should know them yet...), but aside from that, I'm digging the ride.

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Jul 18, 2022Liked by JL Johnson Jr.

I really love the saturated and vibrant colors- I think the pages with the haybales work very well with that glow, I really feel like the hot sun is just shining bright and hitting.

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Thank you! That is something that Bea does very well. She plays with lighting in such a realistic way.

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