“And I’ve heard all I will from either of you of this Divine forsaken war."
Smart to use the comic page to frame the prose, draw readers in, and give them a visual reference for the characters. Nicely done!
Thank you! I’ve been sitting on this piece for about 2 months. I was busy trying to make it something it wasn’t. Decided to just let it be.
Appreciate the feedback as always.
Oh, interesting. I thought the ending was pretty poignant, as well. Sometimes your gut just knows better than your head.
That means a lot. The ending bit has been with me since the earliest of drafts. Ulius is a cold motherfucker, but he’s got a heart in there too.
Earliest of the Ennead drafts that is, not just this short.
Smart to use the comic page to frame the prose, draw readers in, and give them a visual reference for the characters. Nicely done!
Thank you! I’ve been sitting on this piece for about 2 months. I was busy trying to make it something it wasn’t. Decided to just let it be.
Appreciate the feedback as always.
Oh, interesting. I thought the ending was pretty poignant, as well. Sometimes your gut just knows better than your head.
That means a lot. The ending bit has been with me since the earliest of drafts. Ulius is a cold motherfucker, but he’s got a heart in there too.
Earliest of the Ennead drafts that is, not just this short.