Thank you for the feedback. My hope is that once the number of them grows a bit it’ll be even more useful for readers to get a grasp on the worldbuilding that’s gone into this story/place.
I wish I was as clever as your critique gave me room to be. That was a typo and has been corrected. I wish I’d thought of it first; it’s just a symptom of sneaking in time for these after the kiddo has gone to bed.
Loving these shorts brother!
Thank you, my friend. I’m having fun writing them!
I like these short pieces you've been sharing. They're effective pieces of world-building.
Quick question/critique:
Did you intentionally swap out "shuddered" for "shuttered" to set up the intensity of the storms in the next sentence, or was that a typo?
Thank you for the feedback. My hope is that once the number of them grows a bit it’ll be even more useful for readers to get a grasp on the worldbuilding that’s gone into this story/place.
I wish I was as clever as your critique gave me room to be. That was a typo and has been corrected. I wish I’d thought of it first; it’s just a symptom of sneaking in time for these after the kiddo has gone to bed.